He couldn’t remember why he was here
Or where here was
God knows he tried
Again and again
But nothing came to him
He had started his day like he always did
A shower, shave, coffee, oatmeal or a bagel
Just another day. Nothing special
Nothing different… Until…
The dizziness hit him like a firestorm
of darkness and he felt himself stumble
and grab the counter top for support
Then he slipped into the darkness of his mind
His demons danced around in his head
Taunting him, whispering to him
He could feel himself changing as
the darkness dissipated
When he came to, he was still holding
onto the counter top
His demons had won
He knew what he must do
Even though he didn’t know
who he was or where he was
It was then that he realized it wasn’t
a counter top he was holding onto
It was the side of the coffin he was in
He screamed….
It was the last sound he ever made
Written for Slasher Monster Magazine but they
are no longer responding.
~The Tennessee Poet~
©Walt Page 2018 All Rights Reserved
Whoa!!! That was unexpected. I loved it though. 🙂
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Thank you ☺
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That one gave me shivers… great writing!
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Thank you so much dear friend ☺❤
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You are welcome.
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🙂 ❤
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Thank you! ☺❤
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This poem is quite dark, Walt, but it is very good. I hope your pain passes.
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Thank you.
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I hope SMM can get stitched back together; maybe lifted up into a lightening storm. I’ll play the mad doctor dancing around screaming, “It’s alive! It’s alive!”
(Humor aside, thanks for sharing the chilling tale.)
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So do I my friend. I miss it.
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As bad as holding onto the mattress as the room spins round Walt.
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Very true Chris!
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Thanks for the reminder, Walt.
Best be buried with a funeral grand,
and despite being immobile,
with a fully charged mobile phone
placed firmly in hand.
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Awesome!
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Walt, you do frightening really well!!!!!!!
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Thank you Susan! Something different once in awhile 🙂
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I Love it! You have been delving into the darkness a bit lately Walt!
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As my pain increases, so does my dark side. ☺
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I hate that you are in pain. But, so glad you have the writing; I find it helps more than anything else. Sending love to you Walt!
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Yikes!!!! Intense and scary!!!! :0
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Thank you Patty! That’s what I was aiming for. 🙂 ❤
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Frightening Walt, I’ve nearly been there, after holding onto the counter top, . It would’ve been a good one for SMM.
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I submitted it a month ago and she said she would schedule it. Oh well…
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😲
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