Elfje: Blessed

Sunset
Pink Sky
Storm is over
All is calm again
Blessed

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An ‘elfje’ is a very short poem, consisting of only eleven words,
spread out 5 lines using the structure 1 2 3 4 1
Line 1 One word describing the object you want to write about.
Line 2 Two words describing a characteristic or feature of your object.
Line 3 Three words describing your object in more detail.
Line 4 A four word sentence describing your feelings toward your object.
Line 5
The essence of your poem.

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  1. I’ve never seen one before Walt, lots haiku’s though…..I’ll give it a try…..
    Kiss
    So sweet
    Lips of fire
    My heart full of desire
    Burning

    Thanks Walt, but not sure about my style, fun anyhow !!

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      1. It was in you all this time……i find it makes it more exciting to say what i need to say in different ‘languages’… or forms. You’ll be great at a Nonet. ( that’s the one i did for ‘In The End’)…… and watching your page for more Elfje’s, sedoka’s, tanka’s , haiku etc πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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      2. Your wife is correct. It really does magnify your voice. I used to write my poems as normal then fit them into the different forms. Now, it looks like I can just about start off in the form I want.
        I find the Elfje rather easy- just word counts. Oh one more thing- just join one of the challenges out there like Colleen’s Poetry Challenge…. it’ll spur you on- and you gets lots of support. πŸ™‚

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